I agree with the other comments - a great piece of work that could really use a map! I think that giving Selenia some way to communicate with he players would have been great. Maybe she could defend herself or present them with a moral dilemma? What if she actually wants to die and the Celestials are keeping her alive against her will? I like the juxtaposition of the bubblegum pop and a dark-themed storyline!
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Oooooh thats a good-one!
In some of our notes we had Selenia, if spoken with, she would only be half-there. She speaks with the players and glitches mid-sentence, singing or thanking the audience in one of the many concerts being live-broadcast across the system through her brain.
Glad you liked our piece of cute-pink-kawaii entertainment industry horror!