So far the Visual Novel is good, Read through all the way to the current ending, although I have not checked all the dialogue options.
Reading up and learning about all the different species and plants was really cool!
There are some minor things that I got confused with or disliked but they're really just nitpicks,
Spoilers Below -
A Really funny section of Nightmare 2 and the following Retelling of it to Kai is that [MC} Just doesn't mention the fact that Nightmare-Kai said that he was going to "Fuck his dead body", [MC] Can't contain his gay lil' thoughts even in Nightmares, 'cause honestly, that'd probably be very vivid in his memory considering how fuckin' Gay this goober is,
of course it was happening during a very intense scene so I don't blame the guy,
Also Nightmare 3 / Ceiling Body was very uncalled for and a huge tone-shift from the VoreTec scene we had like 5 Minutes prior to it, Personally the shift was way too fast and got rid of any lingering good feelings from the scene.
The title image made me think this game was gonna turn out to be a "Pick a side" type deal where you had to pick either Kai or Vulp Man (forgot his name since he isn't that memorable quite yet),
The Dialogue options don't seem to have that many story branching effects this early on but they might be considerable variables later on, I'm not sure but considering how they're basically never brought up again I don't think they'll have that much story impact?
And I might just be dumb but I haven't found a single clue yet to the mystery outside of what the game and dialogue has explicitedly shown you.
But that's all I have to say, Looking forward to the next update! <3