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Oh I always thought of her as a fake-dom who just wants to be dominated, kinda like Momo.

Oh and please decorate the Idol's rooms a bit, it feels weird for them to have identical rooms but just color-coded.

Maybe have something that fits their character or have it so we can buy them gifts for them to have in their rooms?

Also the lack of Emotion sprites for the Idols are very noticeable in their background story segments as it feels weird when they're trying to display emotions when their face is just straight.

Bugs and things I found in V1.1



Typos:
- Minor Typo in Kuroe's "Headpat" Dialogue
if I remember, she said "Continura" instead of "Continue"
- Minor Typo in Aoi's "Small Talk" Dialogue choice options
Something about "To be friend" which isn't grammatically correct.
- Minor Typo in Aoi's Wikipage.
came from the sea with a heavt -
- Minor Typo in Serafi's "Posture" Dialogue
The word vert in her.. second sentence I think it was?
- Minor Typo in Momo's Introduction Dialogue
(Though this one is more of a personal nitpick)
The word "But" cannot follow after a period.
the correct formulation of the sentence would be;
"Kinda tragic y'know, but also funny as fuck"
- Minor Typo in Momo's "New Guidelines" Dialogue
Discrimantion should be Discrimination 
- Two Minors Typo in Kuroe's "Dog Leash" Background story dialogue
(Another personal nitpick)
The word "And" cannot follow after a period and missing the word "I" in the same sentence, the correct formulation of the sentence would be;
"But I got used to it, and well.. I guess it's a useful skill now."
- Minor Typo? in Yuki's "Song Practice" Dialogue
I can't tell if it was meant to be Practice or Practise,
Practice is US EN and Practise is UK EN.
- Minor Typo in Momo's "Serious-looking" Dialogue
This one is also more of a personal nitpick, "Sup" is meant to be written " Sup' " as it's an abbreviation of 

"What's Up"
- Minor Typo in Momo's "Desk Cat" Dialogue
You forgot the word "be" in "Better be quick"
- Minor Typo in Yuki's "Help with Confidence" Dialogue
Immidately should be Immediately
- Minor Typo in Yuki's "Help with confidence" Pt2 Dialogue
The "i" in "i love you" should be uppercase.
- Minor Typo in Yuki's "Give Warm Gloves" Dialogue
"It's" should be "It" in "It's probably looks stupid" >
"It probably looks stupid"
^ Additionally it's in the wrong choice option box, Unlike Kuroe's Story which is in "Talk", Yuki's is in "Do"
- Minor Typo in Aoi's "Psychology study" Dialogue;
I could chalk this up to her not understanding grammar but "I wanted to ask if you wish to come" is.. interesting wording as she's asking if the player already wanted to go to her room, It should be "If you can" if she's asking for a favor.
- Two Minor Typos in Yuki's "New Plush" Dialogue
"Reallyt" and it should be "the Company's budget"
- Minor Typo in Serafi's "Doing good job" Dialogue
it should be "Doing a good job"
- Minor Typo? in Momo's "Poke poke" Dialogue
"And if I Will grab your hand" just doesn't sound right,
I think "And what if I grab your hand?" sounds a bit better.
- Minor Typo in Momo's "Bored as hell" Dialogue
"I Bored as hell" should be "I'm bored as hell" or
"I am bored as hell"

- Item Menu Animated Arrow Graphic going off-screen

- You can find the same figurine multiple times while doing work; this does nothing for you.
^ Same with the coffee cup.

- The Middle column of text chats that appear during the stream minigame are offset to the left by ONE pixel in reference to the pre-existing chat messages.

- Pressing "New Game" just loads the current save; the only way for you to actually restart and run a new save is to manually delete the save-file inside of the Appdata folder.

- Upon failing the final interaction with Aoi's relationship dialogues, the option to learn with her will be locked and once you unlock the ability to enter her room after having failed her final interaction; you will be given the ability to view the scene instead of entering the dialogue.

However once you exit the scene, the Pt2 of the dialogue will follow.

Here are some things that I just find odd or things I'd personally like to be changed or worked on.

Due to how Dialogue works after maxing out someone's relationship status, having only 3 variations can be kind of boring after some time, especially when you get the same piece of dialogue twice in a row.

Momo's "Bored as hell" Dialogue's choice options don't seem to follow the pattern that the previous ones do as she's not really being "bitchy"

I also found it quite interesting that you can pet the Idols Anywhere, and I mean anywhere.

And they just, accept it :3

Aoi's "Manager Manager" Gave me thousand-yard stare flashbacks to Lobotomy Corporation xd

Please let us hug Kuroe, She deserves a few hugs :3

The new update is really nice though, I love all the new artsies~

Though something I can recommend is making the codes a little less easy to brute-force, I know I have access to them and all but some of them feel a bit too straightforward.

Kuroe already made me think she was a guy at first anyways xd

Also let us hug Kuroe, Just for affection's sake; also because I wanna see her reaction to a genuine hug.

I think that allowing us to enter their room for a small chat instead of heading straight to their "scene" would be much better, letting us talk to them and get to know them a little better, it would play a little more into the "Dating Sim" aspect of the game;

It would be really fun to learn more about the character's backgrounds and daily life aside from the tiny sprinkles from conversation and the wiki page,
Of course; not like they'll spill it immediately, I think it should be every now and then they could have a little heart to heart as they get more comfortable with the player; 

(P.S; Could you add a little bit of brat-taming as an optional route for Kuroe? I just wanna make her mine and protect her and make her feel safe since not everyone is into her kink)

Kuroe very much feels like the "Fake-Dominant" type, It's hard to explain but she very much feels like a teaser who just wants to be treated rough; Would be fun to see this aswell as I adore her character but personally I'm more of a top,

To elaborate a little; Her flirting feels like she's just joking with you and having fun with you than actually being serious, like most "Fake-Dominants" who just say it to be bratty, which is fine as she does enjoy it when you play into her flirting.

Oh and also please add a way to pause the game; because I don't think there really is a way aside from exiting back to main menu?

Game's current state is really good! I love the character designs and their personalities are quite enjoyable aswell, though I do have some critique..

Suggestions;

- Allow for longer streams; At the cost of consuming energy allow the player and the streamer to go live for longer because well.. It's a little odd to just boot up stream for just an hour, especially if you're quite popular.

- Add some flavor text during the streams, something to just spice stuff up like a stream topic or something; just for fun as it's kinda weird for the streamer to just be staring at the camera for an entire hour.

Final Notes;

- The art direction is amazing, major props to whoever did the art; I love it.

- At first I thought Kuroe was a guy until I read her wikipage xd (Might just because Kuroe is really frickin' cute and I'm more into guys so my brain just jumped to conclusions, no offense to her though, she's still adorable and would.)

But yeah, keep going man; this game will be one I'll really look forward to!

How long until the update?
Give a rough Timespan if you could,

Also I thought the mod wasn't working at first because there's no indicator to if the mod is working or not.

It is stated ingame when hovering over Jerri that he is NOT implemented in the game yet.

One thing that is painfully obvious at the start is the Art-style inconsistancy, though I do believe most of the game is comprised by Free assets so I can't blame you,

Enemy AI is a little wacky as they can be completely confused if you just push a box into them, additionally they can easily be dealt with by literally just standing still and punching at their general direction.

The Computer puzzle was odd because it took me like 5 Minutes to even figure out that you had to interact with one of the computers, Additionally I just felt like it was too long for the first puzzle in the game considering that it wasn't even hard.

I do see potential though and I hope you do expand upon the better details of the game but there is much to improve on.

Sadly I cannot support the developer because Subscribestar refuses to accept credit cards of anyone who even has touched Kemono, be it for even a split second

This is really sad because this is a game I really wanna support.

To answer the Bratti question;
It's meant to be like that,
Bratti has the "Staring" Mechanic where he moves away the more you look at him and advance when you're not looking at him.

Hence the "Why aren't you looking at me?" Line.

I feel like the game could really use a Save System as soon as possible because, personally- Not sure if it has happened to anyone else but I've had the game crash on me a few times on the later days, Most prominant on Wednesday for some odd reason.

It is a pain to just have to redo ALL the Nights every single time the game crashes when I try to complete the game.

Also I feel like the Animatronics don't really have a consistant movement schedule? They tend to just teleport anywhere instead of getting closer and closer, One second they're by the hallway to the doors, the other second they're back to the Party Room.

Though that could just be me, good game otherwise.

The reason why it asks for a code is to prevent pirating the game, To "Purchase" the full version you need to just subscribe to their patreon (Not recommended) or ask literally anyone for the code to the game as people are more than willing to just give it out because Jasonafex just.. doesn't deserve the money, 
The code for the most recent version is 9175.

Stumpted on Aurora's Stuff, I know there's a scene related to her but I have no clue how to get it,

I've tried talking to both the AI and the Main Aurora, I can select the Connect the bridge option but after that there's nothing new, I've seen people mention more stuff but I just can't get it to appear.

Game is really good!
Personally I'm not for Torture stuff but everything else was amazing,

This is one of those games where the only complaint I have is that there isn't more, Timber is frickin' Adorable and we need more of him.

Honestly, I could see you pull it off with a longer game with alot more content in it, even if it was just a personal project.
still, Had fun even if the game was only like 30 minutes long,

One thing that was really interesting is how Timber seems to remember choices that aren't neccessarily canon, if that was on purpose; That's really cool-
It's usually hard to pull off correctly and I think it was done pretty well with not too much focus on it, even if it wasn't by intention.
It's really cool when people do that in games that have branching paths like this, with the character having a vague sense of Deja Vu or just refering to choices that did not happen in the current timeline.

Anyways, Timber is adorable, need more of him.
He is very good puppy :3

Some of the Epilogues are confusing as they don't tell you what you require to unlock them,

Atleast the 18+ Wolf Route one as I've done every single branching path within that Route and still not unlocked it.
Kinda confusing.

Edit: Nevermind, I was just impatient and never finished the other routes.

So far the Visual Novel is good, Read through all the way to the current ending, although I have not checked all the dialogue options.

Reading up and learning about all the different species and plants was really cool!

There are some minor things that I got confused with or disliked but they're really just nitpicks,

Spoilers Below -

A Really funny section of Nightmare 2 and the following Retelling of it to Kai is that [MC} Just doesn't mention the fact that Nightmare-Kai said that he was going to "Fuck his dead body", [MC] Can't contain his gay lil' thoughts even in Nightmares, 'cause honestly, that'd probably be very vivid in his memory considering how fuckin' Gay this goober is,
of course it was happening during a very intense scene so I don't blame the guy,

Also Nightmare 3 / Ceiling Body was very uncalled for and a huge tone-shift from the VoreTec scene we had like 5 Minutes prior to it, Personally the shift was way too fast and got rid of any lingering good feelings from the scene.

The title image made me think this game was gonna turn out to be a "Pick a side" type deal where you had to pick either Kai or Vulp Man (forgot his name since he isn't that memorable quite yet),

The Dialogue options don't seem to have that many story branching effects this early on but they might be considerable variables later on, I'm not sure but considering how they're basically never brought up again I don't think they'll have that much story impact?

And I might just be dumb but I haven't found a single clue yet to the mystery outside of what the game and dialogue has explicitedly shown you.

But that's all I have to say, Looking forward to the next update! <3

I know that the Routes Diverge depending on who you help more and there's supposed to be a Good Route if you're clean in the middle,

However even after trying to read through the guide, I'm still finding trouble getting to the Good Route, 
The Guide is a little confusing as it doesn't really "Guide" you into telling you what you need to do.

Unless I'm just doing something wrong and you don't need to go 50/50 to get the Good Route.

Nevermind, Found it..
It's stat-locked so you're screwed if you don't have Agility leveled twice.

Another thing I found while playing the Old version, It might not be prominent here in the revamp however.. The old version is.. Horrible at telling you where you need to go to progress, I've been stuck at the Chapter 4 "Red Light" Section for a good hour or two, Everything I've tried so far has lead to a game-over.

I'd be pretty happy if it atleast gave us a clue or a hint of where to go next because as it is right now, I'm basically slamming my head against every surface to find where I need to go.

But yeah, can anyone just tell me where to go after getting the Blue Keycard?

From what I've played, the game seems good.
The only thing I think should be worked on is the english grammar as it's.. as nice as I can put it, Pretty bad.

Understandable if you're not an english major though, but what I can suggest doing if you're not that great at English, try hiring someone to do it for you, or ask someone to do it.

But everything else is pretty good!

This game made me feel like slamming my keyboard in, Numerous times.

Janky movement, unresponsive controls, the enemies are more annoying than challenging,
The Puzzles are the worst thing in this game,

Believe what you want but I've only played through the demo; and if the final is gonna be like this, It's not worth buying from my point of view.