This is very beautifully written, the descriptive language really helps me to understand the world and Moxxy and Jericho. Also really love the attention to the different backgrounds and color-coded text so we know who is speaking. I thought it was super interesting how instead of the player interacting with two NPCS it was almost like we were an omniscient being, controlling their path and choices.
Honestly the only thing would be maybe to elaborate on the tech or cut down a little. Sometimes it felt like I was getting lost in all of the technical terms. Wonderful game!