Although some visual props would have been nice, text-based games are a genre in their own right that I really enjoy and the story in this one is very well done! Besides being very engaging, I like that you've included different options between texts, rather than overwhelming the player with paragraphs and paragraphs of information. For some reason when I started the game in my browser I couldn't scroll down on the longer screens, but by changing the font size I was able to read everything without any problems. Other than that, I recommend proofreading everything in Google Docs or a programme of your choice. There were a few typos here and there, nothing that really affects the comprehension of the text, but it can be distracting for some people!
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Thank you for playing the game! I'm glad you liked it and I agree I do wish I had made visuals but I just wasn't able to do so, but i'm glad you still enjoyed the story. Damn I thought I had gotten all the typos but grammar checking in twine is very annoying but still, thanks for letting me know and I'll be sure to give it another pass through. Also I wasn't aware of the sizing issue when you booted up the game, I'm still pretty inexperienced when it comes to uploading these games to itch so i'll have to give that another look as well. Cheers for the feedback :]