Hey, that's great! I played through & finished it. It is definitely a cozy game, and the strongest parts are the presentation - the 2D art and the music. Since it is such a text heavy game, I think the text could use more polishing - there are a lot of typos in it. It would have made the text clearer if it had speaker labels everywhere; as it is, the labels are present only in the "memories" sections.
Also, the gameboy section seems to have a couple of bugs, but it's nothing game-breaking. There is no background, and it's possible to click on the environment while the section is playing.
In any case, good work & I really love the 2D art you created for the game!