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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Overall | #6 | 3.067 | 3.067 |
| Dialogue / Writing Style | #6 | 3.400 | 3.400 |
| Characters / Voice | #6 | 2.800 | 2.800 |
| Story / Plot | #9 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
Ranked from 5 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Soo creepy! Well done and good pacing.
Thank you!
Totally matches the October spooky atmosphere! The game could use some proofreading and tonality polishing - the tone shifts in some places, but I don't mind because it was a short and easy playthrough. Just, please, change proceed 3-4 and so on to something else in writing; these mechanical messages break the immersion when you read them.
Thank you so much! And yes, I reeally needed the next-day proofread, a privilege denied by my procrastination. Gonna fix it after the voting is done :)
Fun! Could use another proofreading pass, and the script did break slightly on one of the pages, but I suppose that'll happen when you do things at the last minute. :P It was a fun little adventuring jaunt that was worth playing twice for the different paths.
Thanks! I'm happy you enjoyed it