I really loved the game! The characters feel real, they have a lot of depth. Another great addition to the series (O-O, lake appeared!)
Rikka is so awesome, I wish I could be cheerful like her!
Syun is very handsome... His smile is so heartwarming
Komi reminds me tulpamancy is apparently a thing? I'd like to see Luz's thoughts on that. Voice of Komi: Angel Haven Rey. Really... Did you choose the VA cuz of the name, Meiri, be honest
Lion is actually so cool!? I love him saying "I can see just fine without glasses" cuz it's the same cope I say (in reality, we are both batshit blind)
Kie is literally painted like a brazilian flag what the hell. His and Syuns freaks match!
Luz is... Thank you for the decision to voice act her saying "princess". (hope the VA is not reading this...)
The details of the VN are really good. The changing fonts, changing dialogue boxes... Those details all are so good!
Jumbled mess of incoherence:
Rikka's smile is so cute!!! She has a seal face! She's uwuing in real life!!1! (Is she fifty though?)
Rikka made me remember "I was a teenage exocolonist" and when I checked... It's cuz the protag of that one has blue hair with a yellow strand... Damn, my brain be going places.
I find it funny how the whole path of Syun traveling is shown when he goes out. Also, the transitions are really nice
I relate to @ponfusedtranslator, except I am @happytranslator (Fun fact, one day I sent an email to sadtranslator, angrytranslator, all the ones whose gmail actually existed. I haven't heard back just yet!)
I love the social media so much... Miki Mochipeeve... Meredith Gay...
Lion's whole route is...
One time I went to see the extra dialogue Luz had in the savefiles and she said "You're back again. Addicted to me?" and like damn, I got called out
Damn, the warm light at the afternoon of feb 26th. That was just so wow. Also, the goddamn song... Same as in terasene, her light. Ah, remembering was really nice
I danced the macarena while looking at the mirror and whispering komi just for funzies, you know, and then... "-mi komi"(read in portuguese)... Fell right in that trap, I did
This looks really funny:

Syun is actually... pretty hot, appearance-wise
The CG of the club's anniversary here in this page scares me? It should reassure me, but I don't believe you, not one bit (Low trust meter)
is the book-giving girl a reference to anything?
Typos (my love language is pointing out typos. No, but yeah this is me showing appreciation, sorry if it's weird):
(Btw, maybe you fixed some of these or maybe I'm wrong about some of these. Sorry if anything! It hardly matters since it's still the demo)
The whole thing with Kie's small picture can be seen if you go to any of his phone messages and check history right afterwards!
The thought shows "shouldn't be here", yet the history says "Shuldn't be here"??? (right after "(Maybe the contest is a bust. No one signed up?)
"She always knnows what I'm thinking" two "n"s
"If it's the heath death of the universe" heat
"Luz is the everyone listens to..." the one
"Lion made those! He could make animal any Rikka asked for." any animal
"The dramatic scenarios she painting were far from reality" she was painting
"Her questions did make me a think, though" me think
"and moments where I thought I was about to relive the plast." past
"just delete it at all already" it all
"The members of the have been understanding," the group
"I heave a feeling I knew what Lion means." have
"I went from living in my room with little to not human contact to going out" little to no
"Why is that my own voice sounds so far away?" is it
When Syun is thinking "... a Kamige. And he's a creative writing student. So...!" Didn't you mean a nukige? Or did you want to spare the ignorant one from searching on google and finding weird stuff
Makes sense Rikka is hearing a humming:
(Creepy Komi also happens with Luz)
Right after "You take your dates to bridges?/" Rikka's sprite jumps or something. (in the trust convo)
"Her questions did make me a think, though"
Luz's route (gotta love her Minas Gerais notebook):
(Komi wha-)
"I understand how your guilt must be weighting on you" not weighing?
"needs warning, ho cancels last minute, and makes everything just a little more complicated" ho? who?
"I know exactly that people think of me" Factually correct. Did you mean "what" instead of "that"?
"giving away nothing our the previous interaction"
"An one bedroom, one bathroom apartment" Apparently, it's "A one" cuz of phonemes??? I got so conflicted with this one
Lion's route:
"As Lion glanced at the phone, reality intruded, and a gasp escaped him lips"
"I want to tell his where, but a bone-chilling"
"I told his about the stories and projects I began" Why are these pronouns switched?