For a visual novel, there isn't really much to look at... but are there credits for artists? If it was a bug that caused the images not to display, that's quite unfortunate.
I recommend proofreading and editing the text at least a couple of times before publishing it; sometimes running it through Google Docs is enough. I found several little typos, and some details, such as only finding out the scientist Leo's name after a while of reading about his backstory with the protagonist, break the immersion quite a bit... Beyond that, even though the pacing is a bit amateurish, it has a lot of potential. I really like visual novels and the whole SCP theme, so I hope to see more from you all!