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The document is a bit of a rough read because of the formatting. I'd suggest fewer words in bold and bigger distance between the lines and paragraphs in the future. Despite it, I dig the concept very much. Relatable stuff, maybe a bit too relatable, corpo-world is for a different breed of people 

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I'm glad you read it even if it was difficult, ironically I placed the words in bold to help with the read but I guess it had the opposite result; I'm still finding a way to write documents that feels right to me so thanks for the suggestions.

I'm happy you like the idea, I could even use the sentence "corpo-world is for a different breed of people", it feels exactly right, even making a joke etween "breed" and the different animals of the story