I'm glad you read it even if it was difficult, ironically I placed the words in bold to help with the read but I guess it had the opposite result; I'm still finding a way to write documents that feels right to me so thanks for the suggestions.
I'm happy you like the idea, I could even use the sentence "corpo-world is for a different breed of people", it feels exactly right, even making a joke etween "breed" and the different animals of the story