I honestly am loving what's happening so far.
The character progression is def. there, you can already see the growth from the MC as few days go by. How you gave us CGs is top-tier even though they are still WIP! I love exploring different options and testing what the game had to offer, horny/flirty/respect reputation is a fun mechanic to keep track of. I am looking forward to your next update already!
The only con if i had to give one is some dialogues did feel too stiff and long like that exchange between Duke and MC. It doesn't feel very casual and felt too "wordy".
Thankyou so much for the feedback. It was really nice to read through and definitely lets me know that I'm walking the right direction so far, phew!
I definitely intend to expand on the growth of the MC twofold, im currently designing a system where it should inform the game if you're like a top/switch/bottom and if you lean dom/sub (that way you can get like, service top, powerbottom, domtop, etc) and that can potentially reflect in the dialogue or actions the MC might take.
CG roles, (if/when the prompt is given) will always be flexible to pick so if someone whos normally a bottom decides "nah i wanna pound!" They can. :3c
I do agree that the dialogue does feel stiff in areas, funnily enough- that Duke dialogue qas one that i was looking at rehashing. I do think theres a character coming who's much more fitting for that kind of exchange- so I might move that bit to a different branch (who for them, business IS pleasure) and their ambience/attitudes rubs off on the MC somewhat. (I'd love to have it where each route romance, reflects in the club through the MC somewhat) but yeah, that part of the script was very early into development a couple if years ago, coming back to it- I have some, changes to reflect. <3
By all means, open invitation as well- if theres ever anything you wanna see/do in the game, let me know! Good chance it'll end up in there. ( Be that say like an Archie x Seb, or a MC x Calder or even like a stripclub theme, as theres gonna be themed clubnights ;) )
Thanks again for the feedback, hope the game keeps satisfying!
All the best, and all the hugs!
-Munch.