I liked the overall concept of the game, and the visuals are the strongest element in it.
Some things that detracted from the experience: since it's such a text heavy game, typos and mistakes really stood out. Also, I wasn't able to go fullscreen in Firefox, so I couldn't see most of the instructions the game presents. That means that I failed most of the minigames.
I hope the feedback doesn't come across as too negative. I actually finished the game, which is more than I can say about other submissions in this jam :)
The best thing you can do next time is to really focus on a core idea and reduce the scope of the game, and use the extra time for polishing.