The atmosphere is thick, inappropriate and ugly, which is a good point in this case.
Few comments:
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Buttons has borders on click, This is a tiny thing, but instantly notable. Should be simple to clean up.
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Seems like the starting cut scene is not needed, it adds up nothing to the plot or immersion, only increases time to fun. If it’s not 100% needed for some reason, consider cutting it out of the game.
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Steps SFX is just…not good. They are not even feel like steps and not synced to the movement. It is probably better to get rid of the steps SFX completely or replace it with some looping ambient noise when moving instead of what is currently used.
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It is not always clear when you have to crouch and when you can crouch . Guess you have to work on proportions of the colliders or the camera placement. At time the camera was way bellow the celling, yet I had to crouch , at other times it felt like I can crouch, but it was not an option.
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The goal is absolutely not clear, not from the game, not from the game page. Consider adding at least some basic description to the game page.
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When approaching the butcher, nothing happens, but when interacting - instant death with the screamer happens.
Some of those issues are probably related to the web build, but others are not.
Hope the feedback would be helpful, cheers!