Early days I think the more I do jams the more I see even small feedback is the most valuable gift. I try really hard to give everyone I rate at least one critique or suggestion where possible. It was hard for yours lol, I feel it could have had a little more external narrative to break it up like a call from a friend or needing to feed your dog - just to break it up and give a little more world building. But at the same time you have a tuned in experience where your focus is set, so perhaps its best as is..
I wonder are the items random and do you get different ones in playthroughs and only see a portion? if you haven't done this that may be a way to add more to offering and bring replayability.