It's amazing how you're drawn into the world and the characters so quickly. Loved the design of the UI with the phone and how the picture moves slightly along with your mouse movement. The music was very fitting for every scene and the art was beautiful (even with these familiar faces, hm...)
It was also interesting to see your writing style for something slightly different. Especially since your previous works were mostly something set in a fairy tale/fantasy/medieval themed setting, etc. But the emotion and weight behind your writing is still the same and I love that about it.
The only thing I'm disappointed with is how it ended... simply because I knew it works as a demo, but I was still like 'I have to know more!!' when I got to the end :D
Also felt called out about the 'What are you, an American?' comment. Because where I'm from it's always day/month/year, but basically every english title I've played so far had the American date system in it. So whenever I play something in English Inow go back and am like 'It's probably month/day/year again'... Well, shows what I know xD