This is a *fantastic* showcase of what you can do. I came to be aroused but it was especially my interest in the setting that grew. Okay, my metaphor is perhaps crass, but I stand firmly by it. I expected a short and simple romp through some lewd scenes, not to be engaged in the story, the characters, their personalities and lives. You had me sit through a cafeteria line three times in a row, because that's what Sofia would do! And those seeds of things to come, Oto and his whole deal, making me feel for these heroes. I wait with bated breath the next updates, and wish you superb luck in seeing your project through to the happy ending~