Hey ! thank you very much for the reply! don't worry totally valid judgement, we did find the item pickups glitching but only the last day so we had no time to fix them :,( .
The story thing is totally on me, i wrote it on a notepad and didnt seem long at all, until i had to put it onto the game lmao, but at that point i kinda ran out of time to make it shorter or spread it more, the computer screen WAS supposed to have a forum like thing on it, so the posting format would make more sense, the idea was to add the details at the end but ended up posting only 3 hs before release so i was rushing it like hell.
Again thank you for your kind and honest review !