Wow!! The amount of voice acting in this one blew me away - as did the great character sprites! Really cool style throughout, and great running threads of comedy (the JJJym got me). A few of the backgrounds seemed more unfinished (perhaps intentionally?), but by and large the sketchy vibe worked really really well - I always love tactile-feeling graphics, and the paper doll -ness of it all worked really well with the meta story.
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The exported .wav files throughout were a really wild way to integrate more of the meta story, and have the pop-ups appear as default renpy errors / notifications worked really well to get me wary of things. So much so that when I hit the end of Act 1 / the spooktober demo's end, I wasn't fully convinced it was a real error screen - so credit for some really effective writing!I’ll definitely be looking forward to Act 2 - congrats to the whole team!