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Big boobs is all its really has. There is no real plot. Every girl who appears on screen apparently need to be having sex with the mc in less then two minutes. And he starts with reality warping magic that can just blink people out of existence. What is he just running a tavern as a hobby? Sure as hell not for the money.

Yes. The protagonist does not have any money problems. He decided to open a tavern to change his occupation.

My entire critique is that he doesn't have problems of any kind. And having magic that can just remove people or monster from existence with a thought doesn't set up future ones very well. It's all power fantasy. 

Even a strong protagonist can't solve all the problems. I can't reveal the details yet, but in the future, there will be moments where the right words will be more reliable than his incredible strength. You can also read my other work, where the main character doesn't have such incredible strength - https://lewdmilk.itch.io/lewd-detective-the-island-of-pleasure