My entire critique is that he doesn't have problems of any kind. And having magic that can just remove people or monster from existence with a thought doesn't set up future ones very well. It's all power fantasy.
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Even a strong protagonist can't solve all the problems. I can't reveal the details yet, but in the future, there will be moments where the right words will be more reliable than his incredible strength. You can also read my other work, where the main character doesn't have such incredible strength - https://lewdmilk.itch.io/lewd-detective-the-island-of-pleasure