My entire critique is that he doesn't have problems of any kind. And having magic that can just remove people or monster from existence with a thought doesn't set up future ones very well. It's all power fantasy.
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Big boobs is all its really has. There is no real plot. Every girl who appears on screen apparently need to be having sex with the mc in less then two minutes. And he starts with reality warping magic that can just blink people out of existence. What is he just running a tavern as a hobby? Sure as hell not for the money.