I found it hard to get into this novel at first, I thought "this guy has way too many inner thoughts." but over time, it became endearing more than anything. I adored this experience greatly, both Haruto and Akira are such well written characters, i found myself somewhat attatched to them even without proper backstories that capitalize on truama, which was new for me as im usually only an angst consumer lolol (i lowkey greived the story this could've been when i read the notes that were unlocked after finishing the game..but i still thoroughly enjoyed the fluff.) I was also very satisfied with how the story went about, especially the ending. I also haven't related so much to a fictional character in such a long time..Haruto the man that you are. Overall, this was an amazing play that will always haunt my narrative. Not only was the story a work of art, but the art style itself was extremely satisfying, not to mention the soundtrack..I wonder if it's on spotify? Nevertheless, thank you Ebi for this wonderful game!! i plan on playing every other free vn you have to offer <3.
i like writing 1st person narrators with a lot of inner thoughts, i think it's fun... it makes them feel more realistic to me haha, but idk maybe other people don't think about 1001 things all the time like me
i am an angst enjoyer too, but my most angsty bl vn is this commercial one here... it made my proofreader cry multiple times lol so that was fun
if you want a more dour bl story from me that's free you can maybe check this one out, it's a bit of a mix of gloom and hope which was meant to feel ever so slightly seedy... this is an r18 story though and it deals w/ some potentially uncomfy subjects.
and thank you very much!