This is already visually stunning, could use more screenshots though, I think it would help a lot!! Because I think your game is really cool and stylized + background art is phenomenal !!
VERA MADE ME JUMP!!
Overall I got through most of the game [1 Ending so far], found myself invested (though dialogue games not my cup o' tea) this could be something really big
[Update] Forgot to mention the music is super nice + the settings are such a nice option to have, really makes your game more polished + I think a web build would be awesome cuz it'll make more people access the game!!