While the artwork is not really my cup of tea, I honestly love all the things this game had to offer. The most things I found pleasing is the dynamic that it had, it was quite charming, quirky, and although it had a quite simplistic presentation; it was oddly complex as well. I also love the many interactivity that it had, from the mini games and puzzles, and presentation of choice and decisions is perfect... I really love what you do in here.
BUT... and this is a quiet BIG 'BUT'.... what is happening on the day of we visit Jiro!? What's up with that intense and really and I MEAN really intense and uncomfortable Conflict. It really left a really bad taste in my mouth, I don't like the whole conflict that you implemented in there, specially with how easily everything resolved at the end; considering the intensity of the conflict at hand. Also the way that the conflict seems to just disappear, and everything just turn fine, felt really... REALLY WRONG.
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to go in detail I don't like the whole play with Jiro (which is a kind of father figure to Mert) is blatantly Sexually as*aulting his supposed Son and his friends, and then to have the conflict to just settle with a simple sorry... Like I said before just felt really wrong. Because this topic isn't something to just be taken lightly.
Now, this one thing doesn't really make me hate the whole game, but I gotta say... I don't like how uncomfortable that part is. I think there's a better conflict to be played at here, a conflict that way more appropriate with the dynamic that you're trying to have. A topic that less intense, like maybe it's better to play the focus of the conflict with Jiro strictness, rather than his "Sexual urge". I get that you want to make a game with sensuality, but this isn't something to be taken lightly for a "Just Because"... I do love this game, and I want it to be succeed. So yeah, I'm sorry if I sounded harsh, but it's just something that needed to be addressed. I do wish the best for your project, and keep up the good work.