Oh, if that the case then I can see what you're trying to do... But if this was supposed to be comedic, I think the issue here happened because everything from the start of the game is pretty much always been straight up serious — I mean you even introduce a lot of interesting dynamic and interaction at the start, so the intention of being comedic in this part kinda got washed away. Not to mention that everything kinda went to far, that even if it was comedic since the start, the play is kinda got way too intense, it wouldn't be great if the wrong person got faced by this part...
Thank you for listening to me btw, I hope what I said didn't discouraged you or make you feel any unnecessary feeling... I wish you could get even more better in the future, and yeah — as always, keep up the good work.