The visuals are absolutely stunning here! Everything looked perfect!
One thing I would change however is that the name/name box kind of clashes with the text box and artwork due to it being a bright pink, left over from one of ren'pys default colour schemes. I'd suggest making it black and maybe moving it or making a name box to go behind it. But this is a very small detail that I don't think you need to worry about if you don't want to since it doesn't take away from the enjoyment of the game, just a little thing I noticed a lot more since the text box fit so perfectly with the background.
I also thought that the text being white was a little difficult to read at some points since the text box is also a lighter colour.
I absolutely adored the artwork in this game and the story was very well written, great job :)