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Wow, I absolutely loved this! I'm glad that it starts off with a tense scenario right off the bat, and you did a good job of showing that Gabriela was batshit crazy right from the start. I also really loved that you offered multiple choices whenever they were presented; it was hard to tell what each would lead to which works really well!

There were two errors I found, which I hope you don't mind me pointing out:

  • It sounds like you've got the voice lines playing on the sound channel - the lines continue playing if I skip to the next line, which threw me off the first few times it happened. It also means that the voice slider in the preferences doesn't actually control the volume of the voice, the sound slider does.
  • Nitpicky, I know, but in one ending the word imminent was misspelled as "immanent". I only point this out because the rest of the grammar and spelling didn't have any issues!

I think that this is one of my favourite games of the jam I've played so far - everything was a high quality and I really felt like it was worth diving back in and trying to get all of the endings. I'd also love to know more about where Gabriela came from; that's just too good a hook!

TYSM for playing and enjoying it! 😭😭🩷

I'll fix the grammar issue ASAP, but I gotta look into fixing the audio. This is my first time having a VA so I honestly forgot there was another option to do voices! But I'll be sure to fix it too in case it's too loud for someone ♥️👍

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This is Ren'Py, yes? You should be able to play the voice line with

voice "path/to/voice/line.mp3"

in your code, so hopefully it's a quick thing to update it all through find-and-replace!

PERFECT, thank you so much for the heads up :D