At first, I was worried about the quality of my visual novel plot (friends had already criticized it, but rightfully so), but now I think I've also screwed up the translation.
If anyone plays my novel and rates the translation (whether it's passable or downright terrible), I'd be VERY grateful! And, of course, I'll play your game and give you feedback.
I was planning to translate my next project the same way, but if things turn out badly now, I'll ask someone I know for help in the future.
