Man, you really knocked this out of the park! The main menu did a great job of setting the tone for the story before I even started playing it, and opening it up with the choice for whether or not to do such simple tasks felt very ominous. I loved the overall art style - how exactly did you create the sort of...I don't know how to describe it, the crinkly effect (?) with the colours?
I really liked that this didn't just stay a story about emotional neglect - that towards the end the eyeball, and especially the mirror-shard-monster, made it feel more eldritch and scary (banger designs on them, too). I'm looking forwards to seeing where it goes - whether the girl is okay with whatever happens next, or whether her limits will be met. Also, am I right in guessing that the girl's hair is so long because her mother never takes her to get it cut?
The only real complaint that I have is that some of the GUI and UI elements don't blend well with the rest of the art style, but when you're jamming, you just don't always have time to do everything that you want.
Great story overall, and I'm really glad to have played it. Fantastic job; best of luck with it all!