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Thank you so much for the feedback! We’re doing our best to keep the text as clean as possible, but since English isn’t our first language, we apologize for any mistakes. We’ll make sure to correct them whenever we notice them!

For Miel, this is actually the very first game and story we’ve ever written, honestly, we had no idea if the game would even get any downloads, but the support we’ve received has been incredible! Because of that, we’re already working on everything that still needs improvement! Alongside new chapters, we’ll also keep refining the existing ones, for example in v1.2 we completely remade the teacher design

As for Miel's story, at first we weren’t sure if the character would be appreciated or if her story would even matter to players. That’s why we presented it in a simpler way, mainly to see if readers cared (which we quickly realized they do) From now on, every interaction will feel much more natural!

Thank you again for trying our game and supporting us!

Something that might help for the grammar and spelling mistakes is having one or two proofreader, preferably people who's first language is English (for the english version at least).
Anyways, is there going to be a Discordserver for the game?

Yes! We're actually working on a Discord server!

By the way, did you play version 1.2 or an older one? Just so we know where to check!

I played v1.2, Things I meant are for example something like very early on
"So, Lussuria Academy huh, I'll [...]"
Where something like
"So Lussuria academy, Huh? 
I'll [...]"
Feels a lot more intuitive to me for example.
Also "Great i have to mean the principal." should be "Great, I [...]"
In the Cafeteria the food appers from "tin air" instead of from "thin air"
Over all there are a lot of small "I" and "I'm' and such

I am very much looking forward to the new releases! Is the game going to be a pure VN or will it have Sandbox parts?

It will be a pure vn!