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I played v1.2, Things I meant are for example something like very early on
"So, Lussuria Academy huh, I'll [...]"
Where something like
"So Lussuria academy, Huh? 
I'll [...]"
Feels a lot more intuitive to me for example.
Also "Great i have to mean the principal." should be "Great, I [...]"
In the Cafeteria the food appers from "tin air" instead of from "thin air"
Over all there are a lot of small "I" and "I'm' and such

I am very much looking forward to the new releases! Is the game going to be a pure VN or will it have Sandbox parts?

Something that might help for the grammar and spelling mistakes is having one or two proofreader, preferably people who's first language is English (for the english version at least).
Anyways, is there going to be a Discordserver for the game?

The game so far is really fun and I absolutely adore the character-drawings.

There were quite a few grammatical errors and spelling mistakes as well though with a lot of very long nested sentences that could have easily been broken apart.
The pacing also seems a bit rushed, we meet Miel and two minutes later she tells us her entire lifestory for example. Similarly the Oliver part seems kind of out of place with where and when it happened. 

That all being said:
I really enjoyed what I played so far and am definitely going to continue playing future releases, I just wanted to give you honest feedback on what I thought about the existing parts up to now

I really have to say, i adore your work, the games themselves always feel rewarding to play through because at some point the money you get per day actually is enough to get further even though the beginning is a bit of a hassle but that is fun, also the mechanics are over all usually nice, the chara lore is interesting as well and the art is really well done, even though some people might see AI-Art and hate it but ive never seen anything that really distracted me in your art (like a sixth finger or a third leg or something like that).

Id love to be able to unlock all content even without paying if i grind a bit but i can totally understand the decision to lock in behind a paywall and the games are very fun even without that

Im happy to see that you are resuming creating games and am looking forward to what other games come from you

For all the people wondering where the update is at: First, it is a free game that is VERY well done and takes a LOT of time to create, also you can see that there was a delay (it took me a minute to find ( https://www.patreon.com/posts/update-delay-for-92610512 ))
Also again it is FREE so even if a short heads up wouldve been awesome, pressuring the creator(s) into being faster or crying about why it isnt here is kind of dumb, its not that they are indebted to you in any way (unless you are a patreon member but then you would know about the delay)so just be happy that they create this game at all and wait for a few more days or maybe some weeks

I love your game @nrproductions and am very grateful for the fact that you even created in in the first place