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HOLY FRICK, WHY IS THIS NOT THE MOST PLAYED GAME?! 

THAT

THAT DOESN'T MAKE ANY SENSE!!!

Okay, holy frick. This is my favorite game of the entire jam.

Firstly, ALL OF THESE ART-PIECES ARE GORGEOUS. EACH PORTRAIT, THE SMALL DETAILS, IT'S, IT'S AMAZING!

The absolutely love the journal way of dialogue, the pen-clicking and writing sounds scratch an itch in my brain, the UI is absolutely masterful!

I really like Noir settings, and this does it SO WELL. The way that the suspect's story's blend together, and cut each other off, the transitions being a paintbrush strokes's wonderful, and I KNEW IT WAS HER! FIRST TIME I SAW HER, I KNEW IT! YOU CAN'T JUST ALLUDE THE FIRST SUSPECT AS A WOLF THEN INTRODUCE LITTLE RED RIDING HOOD ALL WILLY NILLY AND NOT EXPECT ME TO CONNECT THE DOTS!

Red Riding Hood actually being the wolf though is really nice, and also the person costumed as the Evil Queen, just MUAH, chef's kiss, what an icon.

Every character has excellent developement, you masterfully built the world and the Detective's story BEFORE jumping into the main game, and again, these cgs are MASTER-PIECES! The overwise gray scene, with the velvet staircase bleeding out just looks SO GOOD! OMG! HOW IS IT THIS GOOD

I don't even know what to put here, like, I have no notes, it's just 10/10, after 10/10.  😭

Wait actually yes, PLEASE CHANGE THE THUMB-NAIL! THE THUMBNAIL IS LYING! IT DOESN'T MATCH THE GAME AT ALL, please put a cg there, you have so many master-pieces, it kind of looks on the outside like a amateur-ish game, and it's not even 2D, which you should totally capitalize on, so no offence, but PLEASE, CHANGE THE THUMB NAIL, I BEG YOU, IT'S GATE KEEPING PEOPLE FROM THIS MASTER PIECE, ITS CRIMINAL  😭  

But okay, enough of that, I genuinely think this will win grand prize, nothing else so far has matched it, the fact only a few people have rated it is CRIMINAL. OMG. AHH. Okay.

Oh, also before I forget, do you think you could possibly play/rate my game, please? ^^

But yeah, holy jeez, I have absolutely no other criticisms, it's just, it's perfect. Yes.

Perfect.

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THANK YOU. You've made my day <3

You are right. I am really bad at making an engaging cover lol. It's literally the last thing I threw together before submitting. It is the art for the main menu and I was like "if I make this, it is gonna be the cover and banner as well just to be done with it" xD

I've played yours yesterday! Just didn't have the time to drop a proper comment/feedback yet! I'll do it tomorrow morning (Sat) when I'm less tied up ^^

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That's absolutely fine man! :D

And that's totally fine, I'm not great either, hahah! Eventually, I just decided to crop one of the cgs, and it works as a perfect cover, I bet you could do the same, if you'd like. ^^

Anyways though, have an excellent day m8, hope you get the recognition you deserve.

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So... I took your feedback to heart and made a new cover!

Again, thank you so much for your feedback ^^

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OMG IT LOOKS SO GOOD!!! :0

I hope it helps, it's really representive of the game now though! :D