Thank you for testing it on all browsers, that's wonderful of you! That's really useful information.
I'm really glad you like the story! As you saw in the other comment, it was a ridiculously short-notice rush job. So much so that, there was actually supposed to be an earth element too, but I ended up cutting it just so I could actually get a couple of hours of sleep before work. Check out the reply I just wrote to someone else, if you want the full story. Really bad luck.
Yeah, I have experience with Ren'Py. I was making my own visual novel out of a WIP novel I had. Then I decided to work on a different novel before getting too far. Morgan really suits me, it seems. If you meant that we could switch to Ren'py after the game jam, we actually have a pretty well developed idea for this game's gameplay, and they're even half-coded, so I think it'd be more fun to try to finish that, if my team is up for it. I sure am.
You can put "SPOILERS" and then talk about what you liked about the story, if you'd like! I actually am surprised that you're calling it Star Wars-ie, but after thinking about it for a bit, I completely understand what you mean. It's definitely got elements of balance, "turning to the dark side", in a way, stuff like that. I guess that might be why you chose that descriptor. That makes sense, I have loved Star Wars since I was a kid.
Thanks for the comment!