The art is very pretty. The music is great! I read that programming presented difficults (which is understandable, even with many programmers on a team). The story is gorgeous. Have you considered using Ren'Py and focusing on the novel while adding some 2D art? Your art is really good.
I don't want to do any spoilers, but I liked the story! It was a bit Star Wars-ie and sweet but sad.
Good work.
Oh, and it worked perfectly well on all browsers I tested with.
Thank you for testing it on all browsers, that's wonderful of you! That's really useful information.
I'm really glad you like the story! As you saw in the other comment, it was a ridiculously short-notice rush job. So much so that, there was actually supposed to be an earth element too, but I ended up cutting it just so I could actually get a couple of hours of sleep before work. Check out the reply I just wrote to someone else, if you want the full story. Really bad luck.
Yeah, I have experience with Ren'Py. I was making my own visual novel out of a WIP novel I had. Then I decided to work on a different novel before getting too far. Morgan really suits me, it seems. If you meant that we could switch to Ren'py after the game jam, we actually have a pretty well developed idea for this game's gameplay, and they're even half-coded, so I think it'd be more fun to try to finish that, if my team is up for it. I sure am.
You can put "SPOILERS" and then talk about what you liked about the story, if you'd like! I actually am surprised that you're calling it Star Wars-ie, but after thinking about it for a bit, I completely understand what you mean. It's definitely got elements of balance, "turning to the dark side", in a way, stuff like that. I guess that might be why you chose that descriptor. That makes sense, I have loved Star Wars since I was a kid.
Thanks for the comment!
Good idea!
The prophet in your story wanted to save his daughter. Other than that, it bears similarities.
We all have trouble dealing with loss and helplessness and I think it is a good subject to bring up with art!
If game elements are planned, I would love to see that and help test that. :)
I am glad you got some sleep. Good work on your project.
