Do you have a beta reader for the English? There's a bunch of just typos and basic grammar mistakes that I thought about sending in, but taking thousands of screenshots is a bit too much.
(Like if you have a word document or so as script, I'd offer, but documenting it all in screenshots etc is too much work for free)
The writing itself is perfectly fine, it's really just grammar and typos, in one or two cases word choice, so you can feel confident!
just one ex, prowess (this one was a repeat typo) with two s, it's easy to understand even with the missing s,it just reads smoother when corrected.
I'm looking forward to more in any case, polished or unpolished, it's a WIP right now so nobody expects perfection from the start. Wishing you patience and snacks!