The writing itself is perfectly fine, it's really just grammar and typos, in one or two cases word choice, so you can feel confident!
just one ex, prowess (this one was a repeat typo) with two s, it's easy to understand even with the missing s,it just reads smoother when corrected.
I'm looking forward to more in any case, polished or unpolished, it's a WIP right now so nobody expects perfection from the start. Wishing you patience and snacks!