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this is a good game! the art and writing are very interesting, and the subject matter feels very real. for constructive criticism, i wish there was the ability to change the settings while you're in the game rather than just save. also, there was an issue where the text would keep skipping itself (i think sometimes that was on purpose?) but i had to keep going back to see what i missed. other than that, i enjoyed playing this!

Thank you so much for playing it! That makes you to first person to ever play something I've made! :) Thank you for the feedback, I'll keep working on this and make sure that the settings is easily accessible. As for the skipping that was intentional. I was trying to use fast text to help convey the emotion in certain scenes. Was that terribly annoying? I think it works really well in the mirror smash scene, but everywhere else it might not do what I was wanting it to do. 

i think it's because there are also pauses in some sentences. so i'll click to finish the sentence and at the same time it'll suddenly skip itself so i'd have to go back. what i would recommend is to leave a 1 or 2 second pause at the end of the sentence before you skip it, so the reader at least has a chance to read the sentence before it disappears.