thank you!
With the 6/4 section, I wanted to call back to the 4/4 melody by having a part that had the same melodic idea but In 6/4 which may have been what caused it to lose its breathing room since I was trying to “fill in” the 6/4 if that makes sense. I will say I am inexperienced with Time signature changes and I probably should have taken more care into making each section the best it could be.