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The 4/4 theme is awesome, really. It has a Megalovania from Undertale vibe without plagiarizing it.

Melodically, both 4/4 themes are excellent.

However, since I like you and think you're capable of doing incredible things even in a short amount of time, I'm going to take the liberty of criticizing the 6/4 part: the melody doesn't breathe enough. The rhythm is too similar in each measure. In 4/4, you do three measures with the same structure, and the fourth gives it some breathing room and restarts the loop. Surprisingly, you didn't do that in 6/4. I feel like the melody is more intellectual and that you tried to fill up the 6/4. Am I wrong?

Otherwise, the 5/4 in transition mode is great, the tempo halved works very well.

And your transition sounds are used more sparingly.

Despite my criticism, believe me, I really like it and I'm impressed by the quality you've achieved in such a short time. It's a real talent!

thank you! 

With the 6/4 section, I wanted to call back to the 4/4 melody by having a part that had the same melodic idea but In 6/4 which may have been what caused it to lose its breathing room since I was trying to “fill in” the 6/4 if that makes sense. I will say I am inexperienced with Time signature changes and I probably should have taken more care into making each section the best it could be.