Hey Batpan,
You were my Gem of the Stream! Check it out:
The atmosphere you've created in your game is perfect for a horror game. The pacing of the story was good and getting to see the full story of these characters was satisfying. I really love the look of this game, the found footage psx aesthetic is pulled off really well. In some ways I wish the game was longer and had more strange things happen that would allude to the main characters past (like the school locker) but as this is your first game the length is fine. Really top work and looking forward to whatever you create next!
I have created a Discord as a space for game devs to talk about their experiences and share their games. Would love to have you join!