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Hey, this was actually interesting so far! there was this nagging sense that i couldn’t help but felt off about this circus, im curious what’s the lore going to be behind it.

so far the characters meshed naturally with each other and into the setting i noticed that i guess it helped due to keeping up with what was going on, their reactions and actions in between still like juggled a good dynamic. customization didnt really disturb the flow or anything so far, they succeeded in player’s immersion, though cant say yet of the personality quiz and the book result but i have a feeling it would affect some major plot points later on like appealing to one of the love interests or something. oh yeah also! i’d like to help out tidying up and sweeping those typos at your convenience on how best should i notify you on them since there were quite scattered many across.

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Oh wow, thank you! Thats all really good to hear! Put me in a happy mood for the rest of my day!


The quiz is going to have effects, that's true 👀 in the prolouge it just changes a line or two of Milo's dialouge.

I'm surprised there were so many typos! I guess no matter how hard I look, eventually the brain just starts autocorrecting for me. Since I wasn't expecting there to be as many as it sounds like, I didn't prepare a way! I'll let you and the page in gerneral know when I figure that out 😅

Thank you a ton for giving it a read through and letting me know how its feeling!

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no probs really! glad to see another cooking potential for good yanfic! oh and one thing i just remembered and also noticed was the placement of those textboxes in chatting, somewhere towards the middle can seem a bit unaligned, moreso when playing on phone.