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I don't think someone politely opening a door has ever made me jump so hard before!

Spoilers as i try to think something through
I caught pretty quick, with the funeral photo, that "casey" was likely the killer

So the leaf-taker, already wearing casey's body, killed stephen.

then the leaf-taker abandons casey's body, to take another body while wearing casey's personality.

now it is supposedly going to take the bosses bosy while leaving some unknown 3rd persons corpse?

I guess im just wondering of im getting the way identity versus body shifts right. first body, then identity?

so now the body of "casey" (some third person) will be found while..... this 3rd person will be who people see but really its the body of the boss?

but that can't be right because then the boss will be "missing" to everyone else and the thing is the leaf-taker doesn't leave "missing" it leaves "extra" 

im misunderstanding something somewhere

Edit: did the leaver-taker replace him way earlier??? Because if the body in the third row was the corpse, then the body of the real stephen was being puppeted before then as another person. But no, because that would make two phoney steohans as one is the body of him and one the performance. 

How did i already know the body and killer in the first 5 minutes but the actual function of it is still turning me around???? (This is a positive thing and in enjoying it)

Riviteing! What a cool way to show your story,was super invested the whole time with my whole heart

Oh, no, im sorry for the misunderstanding! We dont know the rankings yet! I just meant that even if i DID end up dead last, your comment here and on the main game page would definitely keep me pretty encouraged to keep going anyways!

It is my first! Thank you! And thank you for the heads up on the typos. I cant edit it during the competition, but I'll go over it again for sure after!

Thank you for the support! it means a lot to me, even if i hit last place i wont be discouraged now💕

made me feel hot and suffocated while its raining with a wind warning outside. 

Oooh! Some of those descrptions had me tense and my teeth clenched! Im not claustrophobic but that i was very scared what those stairs were gonna be like. I admire your description ability!

Oh, thank you im really touched! 😭
Im gonna be smiling from this comment for at least a week! 

Im very glad you enjoyed the little story and all the different parts of it and my freaky guy. For a while i was considering the tag line being along the lines of "in life, you never know which chocies are important or if you're making the right ones till after you've made them" but i couldnt come up with a smoother way to say it, lol. 

Whaaaaat but hes so nice thoouuuuugh 🤣 congrats on your escape! Glad i could deliver the sesonal spooks

IM SO HOOKED i wanna know what's going on so bad. like there's hints and what not but the devils in the details (of your own creations, ba dum tss) this is just.... and the nameless fairy is soooooo 😍 They're all interesting, it seems like their insanity and cruelty is also a desperate attempt for their own survival? but kai is a fence sitter of some sort???i could stay in Shyloh's thick arms forever though~

Thank you! I hope each one will be better than the last ｡⁠*ﾟ⁠+⁠*⁠.⁠✧

Thank you for the interest! Arlo has great car skills to swerve hard enough to throw Vann back and not drive off the road 🤣

Ahhhhh thank you! I'm surprised and thankful for positive reactions! Knowing they aren't coming off as one character copy pasted three times is a relief. And that's a good note for me to hear, run on sentences have been a weakness of mine since grade school. 

Oh my gosh, thank you, it's fixed now. Feels like every time I fix one typo, I create a programming mistake!

I love and would die for this pet clown. I did run into an issue that i cannot get out of the practice mini game, there's no obvious way to exit that mode. But if it needs me to play forever, then that is simply my life now. 

MILO CLEAVAGE 🎉

Thank you so much for commenting, I can't express enough how much I appreciate it♥️

I wasn't sure if I should rework the naming bit to make it clear it's both for pronouns and not the last name, so thank you, that's very helpful! And since it sounds like there's way more typos than I'd realized, I'll work on that to.

Oh wow, thank you! Thats all really good to hear! Put me in a happy mood for the rest of my day!

The quiz is going to have effects, that's true 👀 in the prolouge it just changes a line or two of Milo's dialouge.

I'm surprised there were so many typos! I guess no matter how hard I look, eventually the brain just starts autocorrecting for me. Since I wasn't expecting there to be as many as it sounds like, I didn't prepare a way! I'll let you and the page in gerneral know when I figure that out 😅

Thank you a ton for giving it a read through and letting me know how its feeling!

Oh i love it and i love Boone! though that cg is NOT just him making you sleep 🤣 not that i would trade it  for the world, it was a happy surprise 👀 seriously though, the whole thing is a nice little bit of yandere food for thought, I'll be imaging how things play out after for a while! love me an older man cowboy~

Thank you for asking this question, i was just wondering the same thing!