This is cool! The dialogue was super good. I loved that if you pressed the train announcement buttons, you got clapping noises. And the ending line--she said exactly what I was thinking, lmao! XD
Lmaooo, and the funny thing is that I wrote this with another metaphor in mind and had the initial draft end a couple lines prior. But when re-reading it, I was like whoops. It makes for a stronger punchline, I think...maybe lol.
