Just played the game and can see your passion behind the game! So I figured it deserves a little feed back. The game reads well, there are a few minor wiriting issues such as spelling and grammar but the game probably has over 50,000 words so theres going to be a few. Each character are wholesome and great, from design to personality. It was a fun read and the H scenes were good too! My only minor issue is what accents, not really an issue but some accents are hard to portray through texts and some are hard to understand/read unless you're familiar with it/them. All in all, great game so far, can't wait to see where the game goes!
Hey, I'm really glad that you had a good time, Accents are a bit of a weird thing to handle when it comes to writing, mostly because I didn't add any special accent in the way the text is, even though Vanessa as a very light touch of scottish accent, Elise's to British, and Himia to something a bit similar to norwegian.
Still I picked something that was visually readable to something that could've been confusing.
As for the grammar issues, yah it's a mess I've got to take a good day and take care of all of them honestly !