This entry feels very humble and honest with its plot and characters. It's very simple and I love the soundtrack.
It has an overall chinese vibe. There is a little world there that feels charming and lived in.
However, a bit more direction as to what to do (the objective) might help first time players.
Maybe an NPC to speak to that reminds you what you have to do. I got a bit lost because I forgot to report back to a quest NPC.
Another suggestion for polishing are the events where characters interact. Right now they all stand on 1 spot, it'd be more elegant to design full scenes where each character has their own spot to talk and walk around etc.
At Lakeside Commons the maps seem to break a little here and there, becoming less refined.
But overall, really nice and I might play more later.