Really impressive that you managed to put together all those story details during the jam! I know how tough it is to come up with a story with fleshed out world building in a short amount of time. So amazing work on that end!
It’s always a tricky balance between pulling the player/reader straight into the action and making sure they actually understand how the world works through exposition. And trying to juggle that in such a short window is even harder. Despite the things I pointed out, it's still a very impressive job!