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Great job on submitting :) it was a nice idea, but I think a little too slow to really get going. Generally in a game jam you want to be aiming for 5-10 minutes of play time  and you want to really hook people at the start. It feels quite aimless at the start before you get a feel for how you can affect the game, and by the time you understand everything properly it becomes quite easy. I can't complain too much though, it's a jam game and you won't have had much time for testing :)

Visually, it looks pretty good, though all of the colours are too saturated! I think you need to tone it down a little bit. https://mycolor.space is pretty good for picking a cohesive colour palette.

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yeah .. I think I added too much content so I over scope my self to the point that when I finidhed the game I hade no time left for testing or adding a tutorial .. which harm the game a lot

any way thanks for playing my game and the feedback !!