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loving the energy of the first track!! loving the melodic lines!!! i don't know if it's part of your inspo, but they sound very improv-adjacent and i LOOOVE melodies like that! the bass line stepping down and jumping octaves provides a good rhythmic pulse and contrast to the melodies going on above. i love the energy of this track wowow im grooving to this, it def fits the story being painted here! the electronic theme makes me think of the games and chaos of the boardwalk, supersuper fun i love

this song is a good transition point, still maintaining that fun theme while it still feels like the main character cannot decide whether today is a bad day or not, each melodic line building a more positive line before shifting darker. this is largely due to your chord progression, which fits very nicely with your theme! again, i love the way you compose your melodies, very improv-y! when the piano had the melody around the 1:18 mark, i feel like it was a little lost under the other instruments. in general, your mixing is very well executed - there are just some Very small sections where it doesn't feel like your wonderfully composed melodic lines have space to shine through, and i wanna hear em!!!! (this may be due in part to my hearing problems, so take this w a grain of salt)

wow this one is super goofy me likey - loving the attention paid to instrumentation here! its joyous, whimsical, and chaotic - but never too busy! ok those sound effects are actually awesome i giggled irl. i like hearing what i'm interpreting to be nods to the previous two tracks in the melodic lines that return quickly to the main idea! 

supersuper fun OST! it was an incredibly entertaining listen, thanks sm for sharing! :D

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Thank you so much for the detailed feedback!

That section in track 2 at 1:18 is the part of the entire OST that I had the most trouble with. I rewrote it at least 3 times and messed with the mixing there the most too but I agree that in the end it was the part that came out the most struggled. The song I used as inspiration had a very similar section hence me having it, but I could never get it to sound as good as theirs unlike the rest of the music where I felt I got a good grasp of what made it work. I still think it plays an important role in breaking up the sections, but it was the hardest to make work and it shows.