Ah! I just finished this! <3
I checked this out originally because I thought the art and UI looked so good (even if I'm only very lightly into ponies) but I'm sure glad I did!
I loved the writing and the dialogue and I thought a peek into Fluttershy's anxieties were very good and very relatable. I think my favorite conversation had to be when Applejack and Rarity were talking about love tho-- it was all just VERY FUN TO READ and it resonated with me. I could feel a lot of really genuine stuff reading this and I'm really glad I played thru it a couple of times.
If I had to suggest anything, I would have loved to have a narration bleep to go along with the other bleeps. Because of the lack of music, it just made it feel a 'lil lonely without it! (I know music can be hard to get a hold of, so I totally understand not having it-- tho I'd love to hear some in your next game!)
Other than that, I loved every other bit about the game! The art and backgrounds are all super well made and nice to look at and the UI is VERY NICE, something I always appreciate.
Oh! And if you don't mind sharing, I'd love to know a bit more about your process for making your soundfonts because I also use them and always wanna know about other's processes as well, esp cuz yours are SO NICE!
Over all, I'm very much looking forward to your next project and I'm glad I stumbled upon this!